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#248: First Impressions Matter: Introducing Your Protagonist the Right Way

Nanci Panuccio Season 6

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Your protagonist’s first appearance can make or break your story. That opening impression tells your reader whether they should lean in, or move on.

Too often, writers get stuck in backstory, mundane routines, or quirky details that don’t really matter yet. The result? A flat introduction that fails to spark curiosity or connection.

In this episode, we’ll cover:

  • Why your protagonist’s introduction carries so much weight.
  • The 4 most common mistakes writers make in opening scenes.
  • 3 strategies to ensure your main character’s first appearance is memorable, relatable, and compelling.

By the end, you’ll know how to craft an introduction that makes readers care, and keeps them turning pages.

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